Wednesday, 24 September 2014

Peel for a family member

Write a PEEL paragraph about a family member (Mum, Dad, brother, sister etc.)

You must:

Decide on your umbrella Point  about him/her
Give at least 3 Explain reasons, each with an specific Example
Finish with a Linking sentence back to your P statement.
Use sequencing words for your reasons

My sister is a selfie freak. Firstly every time when she gets home she runs up stairs and grabs here tablet and takes selfies every time I walk into her room bam she is taking selfies she even does it in the Bathroom, Outside, my room, her room, my mums room, friends houses every where. she ask me to take a photo of her

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